There's a man in my room
I don't recognize
A shadow of me
He stepped into the light
Beaming putrid lies
I couldn't even bare
To stare to into his eyes
Why wallow in the ashes
Stuck in clouds of blackness
When above there is light
I couldn't even begin to answer why
I built all of these walls that I'll be stuck inside
Like words that you breathe
Shot through shattered teeth
To cut a smile in me
I couldn't even bare to watch it bleed
Dripped over the walls
I stared as it washed over me
So why stare at my feet
When every losing streak
Gets stuck in the twine
That binds itself to me
supported by 10 fans who also own “Losing Streaks”
This song ticks all the boxes for me. Guitar sounds, vocals, song structure. I can't put my finger on any one factor, it all works together to make a really great song. malfunction54
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Cermony's Ross John Farrar experiments with synths, bass, & percussion to make music similar to that from the '80s homemade tape scene. Bandcamp New & Notable Mar 30, 2023